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If I even had a fraction of your skill I'd be happy.
maybe what you feel is lacking is his sense of being?
What I mean is, he's in the frame, he's moving, but you can't really be sure why. Like, why isn't he just sitting on those steps over there? Or leaning against the wall? Those are just examples, but you know what I mean. This is just food for thought. The entire thing is still nothing short of amazing. Don't be so critical of yourself! ^^
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I do agree with augustc4 about the sense of what he is doing. I think part of it has to be the angle of the sword. It is at a very awkward angle and creates a very strange pose, which I think throws off the image. If the sword is going to be at that position it would probably best if his had is turned around. If he is going to hold the sword that way then it needs to be more horizontal. 90% of the time, when a sword or knife is being held that way the motion used is a horizontal swing, like a right hook punch, where the weapon kinda follows the hand or and upper cut type swing and the arm is normally bent. I can't think of good reason why he would be holding his weapon like that. And I think that maybe the source of your problem.
Regardless of anything I've said, this image is absolutely amazing. You've got a huge amount of talent, and I can't wait to see more from you.
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I see clearly what you're saying, I'll think of it on my next pic, hopefully. Thanks for helping me out
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Pour le ciel, ben moi je le trouve pas si mal que ça. Peut-être qu'il est un peu uniforme concernant la taille des nuages, qui ont tous l'ait très fin, un peu comme si on les avait déchirés. Mais après tout pourquoi pas, ça peut correspondre à un climat particulier.
En tout cas j'aime beaucoup le personnage, et les cheveux sont très réussis. Pour le décor, il a plus de profondeur que dans d'autres de tes dessins où j'avais l'impression qu'on ne sentait pas qu'il y avait différents plans. Ici, à part le sol qui aurait pu être plus travaillé, on sent bien la perspective.
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super les détails mais bizarre la façon dont le perso tien son arme...
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